cuz N told me to. [original post] [those reading in a reader may want to read on the blog for a more sensible presentation]
omo: well written but has the usual marks of “hey this is animu, I use an incompatible framework for a deeper look anyways, lulz” issue. very telling though.
cuchlann: I’m not sure why it’s incompatible — I’m not going to pretend I’m Japanese just because what I’m watching came from Japan, just as I wouldn’t expect anyone else to pretend they’re American. And I’m pretty sure SF criticism applies to SF.
ghost: I don’t get why incompatible either. Is it a high vs. low culture thing? (lols) Is it a visual vs. text issue? Reading methodologies (literary criticism) is quite adaptible once you consider that most things are texts subject to interpretation (i.e. reading).
omo: You can use any framework you want to compare anything, but it could come off kind of silly, is all.
Don’t you find it ironic to say things like everything in the paragraph that started with “So the anime shifted audience focus…”? Are you going to ignore the fact that the whole thing took place in /Neo Venezia/? Do you know there is a real Venezia? Do you know what Aria really is on the surface?
Second, Aria doesn’t take place in an utopia. Unless you think peaceful civilizations are utopic in general. Better put, if I watch a “Come visit Venice!” ad video, it would frame Venice’s attractions similarly as an Aria undine; just much less personal. In other words, it’s a matter of perspective rather than its setting’s construction.
Take a Buddhist view: utopia begins within.
Or better yet: watch Gakuten Utopia Manabi Straight and learn what the word means for the Japanese.
I think it’s a good thing that you talk about utopia, because in a way that’s what Aria is about. But I think most English bloggers don’t because in the West we generally don’t call the same concept by that name.
ghost: No problem about silliness, if that’s the concern. Animu blogging is (or at least in my case) is out of ‘foppery and whim’ (to use an LotGH quote). However this cavalier attitude isn’t really asking for a dismissal.
Now Jeff, your criticism of the text is valid — but the difference now is that it doesn’t seem like a dismissal but rather discussion, which is what I or I assume Greg would welcome. What you said about utopia is very interesting.
@TheBigN
Putting in more than one needs to is not that easy to measure. If one’s purpose is to merely enjoy, not a lot is required. Aria can be appreciated very easily. But it so happens that Greg with everything he knows/is interested in actually has quite a bit to offer in terms of exploring Aria.
Look at it as exploring possibilities of meaning, as opposed to getting to the ‘truth’ of what Aria is.
BigN: Well, that’s not necessarily what I meant by saying “more than one needs”. I look at it in terms of “well, I think I get what he’s saying, so all this other stuff seems extraneous”. But that varies from person to person. And to be honest, I don’t really think that Cuchlann did that in this article. I just used him as an example since we’re talking about his post.
omo: No problem about silliness. I wish it was just less time consuming in order to get to the punch line.
Cuchlann wrote a lot about sci-fi utopia, open/close, w/e. Is it relevant to Aria? I don’t know. Perhaps it is foppery and whim but my patience thins within the TL;DR. But I still read because his writing deserves better! And I didn’t really had time to respond in kind, nor do I do so on greader as I prefer to actually comment on the post if I am going to talk about substance.
FWIW, the only one around these parts doing any kind of dismissing is Owen :V
cuchlann: For now: I would stand behind my classification of Aria as a utopia. Didn’t come up with that myself, I think I saw it first on the wikipedia. At least, Aqua itself — there appears to be no social strife at all, in the first 13.
omo: I highly disagree. There are some evidence of social strife in Aria (and actual instances of it–like the whole girls high school mechanics within the larger undine houses). Then again, when the Akiba hit-and-stab happened it was as shocking as it ever was, and I can see that sort of a thing happen and getting the same response from the residents of Neo Venezia.
ghost: If that’s the evidence of social strife, then it is quite utopic — unless we stick to a strict definition that conflict is reduced to zero.
The back-talk in Himeya Co. don’t really result in slander or libel or career/corporate destabilization. The gossip is already the worst as it can possibly get.
In any case, the difference between Neo Venezia societal peace and warmth and most contemporary cities on Earth is very striking. Relatively speaking it’s quite an utopia.
omo: But that betrays the fact that Neo Venezia is not presented in the whole via Aria. It’s more like a boring countryside world with nice landscape shots. If there’s a schtik to Aria it is the way you see the world depends on your perspective; it’s the job of an undine to frame it for their customers, and it’s that rope that they learn as trainees.
“Real life undines” are not far removed from tourist traps, working in a country full of corruption and social unrest. But you can definitely have a wonderful time in Venice.
North Dakota is not an utopia by any means, even if crime rate is pretty much nil and people generally get by with their day-to-day work just fine. Social strife? Does being cut off while driving count? In a country that spans from sea to shining sea, does a riot at one coast imply the same on the other coast? Would anyone call Japan utopia just because of its low crime rate? How do you define utopia? Only when there’s social strife? Is it possible many Americans social strife is something they only see on TV or read in the papers? I think if you’re going to arbitrary draw lines, you ought to at least look at the big picture.
cuchlann: A utopia is a science fiction setting where technology has changed society, fixing the problems the creators of the fiction have particularly lined up as being relevant. Aria is a world constructed from non-existent terraforming technologies where the society functions in a perfect hierarchy, with full freedom of movement through the still-equal class system, there is no shortage of any resource, and, after all, the show/manga is classified a utopia by its creators/marketers.
And I love Manabi Straight — but it’s not a utopia. It’s the opposite, in fact — a dystopia. Technology has brought about the ruin of the educational/social system that the show, and the characters, value. The title indicates the characters’ attempts to create an utopic environment, with generally high success. However, the setting in general is not a utopia by any means.
Which is not to say there isn’t a lot of discussion in what constitutes a utopia, or whether Aria is best examined through that lens. But to set up a false comparison with selected strata of real-life society, which is never utopic — by definition, as it’s not fiction — serves no purpose.
omo: But Aria is a parallel with real life in its core. I don’t really believe it fixed anything besides unlike the first Venezia, Neo Venezia doesn’t sink into the ocean. I don’t see anything about “perfect hierarchy” from the show at all (if anything there is a sense of hierarchy maintained throughout and it doesn’t seem perfect from those who are “under” it), there is definitely a shortage of resource (just listen to what the Man-Home tourists say about the differences). It’s run much like a space colony version of your average countryside. I believe it’s merely the creators’ choices to not focus on any of the shortcomings people face (well, certain types of shortcomings at least). For what it is worth, Akatsuki is your typical country-side youth who is not exactly content with his life, but gets by because of his strong feelings for the people there.
I mentioned Manabi Straight because the creators also called it a utopia–in a very strong way. So you can’t have it both ways :p
My point, ultimately, is that you can’t really call it utopia without understanding what they mean by it. Which is not what you mean by it.
Let me just step back and outline the points of issues:
1. You use the term utopia in a very specific sense, and I don’t believe this is what the Japanese mean by the word Manabi Straight’s title, and probably in whatever the source of Aria’s wiki article.
2. I don’t believe there are any positive examples in Aria to support your claims and yet I can think of many counterexamples and inferences to say that your claims are invalid.
3. Yet you dismiss those counterexamples arbitrarily, as far as I can tell.
cuchlann: Well, if I seemed rude last night, I’m sorry about that, I was just tired.
Basically, I saw you attempted to use real-life examples to define a utopia, which doesn’t work. It’s a fictional construct.
If we have different interpretations of what a utopia is, that’s fine. I would like to point out the entire post wasn’t about Aria as a utopia, just a part of it.
To clear it up, then, what do you think the Japanese mean by the term “utopia” that makes it different from the traditional?
omo: I had this half-typed up reply but work+other stuff ate it.
Let’s just say that I think Aria is a piece that’s functionally a touristy escapism piece so an idealized world is part of its draw. At the same time it is very different than a literary utopia because Aria doesn’t seek to solve any social problems using technology–it just ignores them, much like an advertisement avoids the negatives of what it advertises. So it’s not really about any kind of utopia.
ghost: Interpretation A is proven to be best, therefore B should not be considered anymore?
Just for thought, I don’t think the post argues that the interpretation within invalidates other possible interpretations, or should be considered the primary reading of the text.
Well, at least that’s not how I read it, or how I put forth my own posts.
And no this isn’t an appeal to ‘let’s all just get along, no one’s wrong really, etc. etc.’
omo: I think my problem is that interpretation B begs to ask a question which interpretation A answers, and since interpretation A invalidates interpretation B, it makes B an odd perspective. I mean I guess it goes to the point that you can comparing anything with anything, and something interesting or useful may come as a result. But why do that if you don’t know if that is the case?
I think another point about literary utopia that is important is that AFAIK all stories with utopia as part of the narrative element use said utopia to illustrate some point. I just don’t see this in Aria, so it makes you wonder why did the creators make that idealized world, and what can a reader gain from comparing that world with the real one?
IIRC, this is left unanswered in the post.
cuchlann: Well, there’s a little in there, but it wasn’t developed. Specifically, I wondered at Aria, as a utopia, not doing what you’re describing. So the question then comes down to this: is the examination of a social point/issue a requirement of a utopia, or something that is frequently done with it but not always?
I was taking the standpoint, originally, that it’s often used, but not required. There’s a very strong case, however, for thinking it’s required. The first Utopia (book of same name, by More), was a social argument and not a work of fiction at all. I feel, though, that the genre has stretched a little.
omo: I think it still comes down to just how strictly do you want to define utopia, then. A setting that doesn’t have any kind of conflict or tension is difficult to mount a narrative, and at any rate that is not what Aria is. The characters in Aria still live in an imperfect world and have to deal with their imperfections. Now just how trivial are these little bits of feelings (”OHNOES MY GONDOLA IS GOING TO DIE^H^H^HGET RECYCLED” /cry) is up to you to decide should it make or break utopia or is this utopia not quite perfect because science in Aria has not invented a perfect substitute for pressure treated wood which lasts forever when used in boating.
I mean, seriously, they spent 3 episodes on it!!!
ghost: Yes, this. I’ve mentioned it eariler. It depends on how strictly we define utopia.
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/utopia
utopia
2 entries found.1. utopia
2. anti–utopiaMain Entry:
uto·pia Listen to the pronunciation of utopia
Pronunciation:
\yu̇-ˈtō-pē-ə\
Function:
noun
Etymology:
Utopia, imaginary and ideal country in Utopia (1516) by Sir Thomas More, from Greek ou not, no + topos place
Date:
15971: an imaginary and indefinitely remote place
2often capitalized : a place of ideal perfection especially in laws, government, and social conditions
3: an impractical scheme for social improvementhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Utopia
I think the practical use of the term is broad enough to say that in utopic idealizations conflict, entropy, deceit is NOT zero. Rather, that the setting is very capable of resolving, dealing with such problems — if they are to be considered evils AT ALL.
Let us consider that Aria is not an utopia in the sense that when we die, Neo Venezia is exactly like ‘heaven,’ rather, given the conditions that humans of that setting have gone through — it is an idealized place, due to its pace, it’s balance of ease and lack of technological shortcuts (Man-home has more conveniences), and the behavior of its inhabitants (perhaps including cats).
